literature

bubblegum

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"Hey, one more thing."
I looked up from fumbling for my keys. She beckoned at me, the skin of her long, bare arm soft in the parking-garage light. I stepped closer. She smiled, and leaned in.
The cap of my hat bumped her forehead.
We laughed nervously then, as the moment regained itself, our laughter died off and she slipped the hat from my head.

Her lips tasted like bubblegum.
I touched my fingers to my mouth while I waited for the exit gate to rise. My first girl-kiss. It tasted like candy - bubblegum. The pink kind. Like her lips.
My laughter and fist punching must have made me look an idiot as I drove away, but I didn't care. I felt like the champion of the world.
trufax.

And no, I don't often write more than a few paragraphs. I like it better this way.
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prettygrrrl's avatar
Beautiful.

Interesting that you signify it as a "girl-kiss." :)

As for me...

I laughed in her mouth.